Standing Ovation: Group 5 How to use evidence

Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Group 5 How to use evidence

We felt the two most convincing claims in our section of the text were that:
Claim 1: Midvale's employees were becoming very productive but were acting as automatons Claim 2: Taylor's ethic is beginning to govern the realm of the mind.

We felt the first claim was convincing because they had recorded time to make more productive operations of the machines and broke down every job into a precice sequence of steps for the workers to follow.

In claim two we agree that the growing power of the computer is beginning to govern the "realm of the mind," because Taylor's system is still in use and it's hard to ignore the impact it would have on the way we think.

Daniel Perry, Jeanice Gates, Jessica Figueroa

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Welcome to our Eng 100 Blog “Standing Ovation”! The title of this blog refers to the audience of active readers we are creating by sharing our academic writing for Eng 100 with a larger group of students, instructors, academics, and just about anybody who chooses to follow our blog! When you write and post your reader responses here (and, later, as you write your essays for the course), I encourage you to use this audience to conceptualize who you are writing for and, most important, how to communicate your ideas so that this group of academic readers and writers can easily follow your line of thinking. Think about it this way: What do you need to explain and articulate in order for the other bloggers to understand your response to the essays we’ve read in class? What does your audience need to know about those essays and the authors who wrote them? And how can you show your readers, in writing, which ideas you add to these “conversations” that take place in the texts we study?
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